Hi my name is Raewen-eve and I am going to tell you people about this man doing Shot Put, he is a New Zealand Athlete. This man is preparing himself to do the shot put.
He is trying to throw the ball as far as he can so he can win first place and also the gold medal for New Zealand. He is concentrating very hard to where the ball is going to go.
His name is Tomas Walsh and he is the first man from New Zealand to win a gold medal for the men's shot put . He is 24 years old and he was born in 1992 and he weighs 125 kg.
Tomas Walsh and Valerie Adams are like the best Shot Put in the word but in New Zealand there are more good Shot Put in the world but in different countries like U.S.A. and other Countries. You can see in the front of him in the t-shirt you can see his last name and it is Walsh and that is how I know. Did you know at Pt England school but the Yr 7’s and 8 watched the Olympic but the mans doing shot put her are some pictures of them and I am going to put some pictures of Valerie Adams as well.
Nice Work Raewen it tells me that you have written more work and that it tells me that you read over and over to make sure it makes sense...
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